Friday Flash Fiction First Edition 2014

Ahoy Fellow Fathomers, this first Friday Flash Fiction of 2014, our photo prompt is a beautiful woman in red...what sparks your mind? Our group of writers will write exactly 100 words, no more no less, to a designated picture prompt. After you read my contribution, please read what the other writers have to say, the links follow. Happy Friday!

See my contribution below:


I kissed Teresa as she softly pushed me backward onto the bed.  “But, can you imagine having fifty years together, every day? I could wake up to you for hundreds of days, thousands of hours.” Tears pooled and fell down my face. I touched them, still amazed at my human advantages. “It’s a dream come true.”

Ever the skeptical creature, Teresa shook her head. “At what cost? What would it be worth to lose what we have now.”

“We wouldn’t be Godforsaken statues for at least fifty years!” Anger replaced my tears.

“Please baby, don’t do this, let's not argue."
 
Now that you've read my contribution, please visit these other authors for their take on the woman in red. Other contributions may contain explicit content.


Comments

Julez S Morbius said…
beautiful and romantic
Doris O'connor said…
Lovely and emotional tease :-)
S.J. Maylee said…
I definitely felt the conflict. Wow, I'm definitely intrigued by this story. Well done.
All that emotion into 100 words. Lovely.
Muffy Wilson said…
I am just as torn and confused as they, but love must prevail. Surely, to love fully and completely is worth whatever price must be paid in 50 years. Many don't live that long and to live in love is worth any price. Love this very romantic piece, Davee :) xo
Michelle Howard said…
this is a tease and creates lots of question. well done :)

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