Tuesday Tales - When a Bracelet Causes Havoc
Ahoy Fellow Fathomers! It's time for Tuesday Tales.
Sitting in the living
room watching mindless reruns, I contemplated how comforting television scripts
actually were. People became involved in what seemed impossible circumstances,
yet they always miraculously worked things out. I liked how in roughly
twenty-five minutes major life crisis situations resolved themselves and
everyone smiled absurdly at the end. This unrealistic montage of catastrophes
turned to bright shiny successes, and I craved such fiction in my own life. A
doorbell chime jingled me back to my reality. “Mom, are you gonna get that?” I
didn’t want to move from my permanent dent in the couch.
The doorbell pealed urgently again. How did a damn doorbell do that- become more incessant with each press of the button? Hell, it’s probably someone just selling wrapping paper or promises to save my soul. I didn’t want either one right now- living on the edge of wrapping paper depletion and eternal damnation felt edgy, feelings I could actually sink my teeth into.
The doorbell pealed urgently again. How did a damn doorbell do that- become more incessant with each press of the button? Hell, it’s probably someone just selling wrapping paper or promises to save my soul. I didn’t want either one right now- living on the edge of wrapping paper depletion and eternal damnation felt edgy, feelings I could actually sink my teeth into.
I swear the doorbell
emitted a sing song of, “answer meeee, answer meeee.” Third time’s a charm, I could
no longer stand it. “I’m coming, I’m coming!” Followed by whispered, “get some
motherfucking patience.”
Swinging open the
door with more force than necessary, I found a small, meek woman. She
definitely didn’t look like the type of behemoth who could make the doorbell-
and the house inhabitants- her bitch. But, she did today.
“Can I help you?” I looked
around desperately for the no solicitor
sign I prayed my mother had posted. I wasn’t in the mood for any lengthy
conversations with a stranger, no matter the topic. Why was I looking? My mom
welcomes the entire clan of beseeching misfits.
“Hi, I’m Heidi
Forrest, I’m sorry to bother you.” Shuffling her feet, Heidi looked down as if
inspecting invisible shoe laces.
“I attend church
every Sunday at the Methodist church here in town. I really don’t need saving.”
Who the hell was I kidding, I hadn’t been to church regularly since that
fucking tornado. But, Heidi doesn’t need to know that.
“What, the Methodist
church? I’m confused.” Shaking her head, and blinking a few times, Heidi gave
me a look of total misunderstanding.
“Never mind, hey, my
mom isn’t home, if you’re needing the homeowner.”
“Well, actually, I was
looking for someone named, named… Rachel.” The words sputtered out, almost undiscernible.
I finally noticed the
tiny gift box she fiddled with between her two small hands. “I’m Rachel.” Even as
I uttered the words, I almost wished I hadn’t. I couldn’t take surprises, or
wrong turns, in my life right now. Rachel
needed a break today.
“This got swept up in
that tornado and ended up in our pasture. It landed in a feed trough, of all
things.” Quickly projecting her hands
forward, the battered box became more visible.
I finally noticed how
dirty the jewelers’ box was, the dirt stains scuffed the sides of worn metallic
silver.
“I don’t understand, I’m
not familiar with that box.” The roaring in my ears was the sound of my heart
beating wildly out of control. Blood rushed to my head, making it ready to
explode. No more surprises, no more
unexpected reminders. I couldn’t do this. Crossing my arms tightly against
my chest, I pressed my hands into my armpits. I wouldn’t take that damn thing
into my grasp. No. Fucking. Way.
“It’s a bracelet.”
Heidi whispered, her head bowed again.
Comments
And then the sadness and heartbreak as she looked at the package was palpable.
Very nicely done on engaging the reader's emotions for her.