Flasher Fiction Friday

Ahoy Fellow Fathomers, this Friday I return to my first recurring blog contribution, the Friday Flash Fiction. A group of writers will write exactly 100 words, no more no less, to a picture prompt. After you read my contribution, please read what the other writers have to say, the links follow. Happy Friday!

"Andrew jumped in the shower in time to soap Bea’s back and massage her shoulders. Bea took her turn to scrub his manly chest with a soapy pouf and stood on tiptoes to shampoo his hair. Andrew slathered conditioner all over her wet trusses and helped rinse her clean. Before he attained a full erection, room service knocked at the door. “Their timing sucks.” Andrew kissed her full on the mouth.
“Think of it as fuel for later, Andrew. We need it.” Bea’s stomach growled in Pavlovian response to the door.
“I’m coming, hold on.” Andrew rushed on rumpled shorts..." 

 For a variety of takes on this picture in just 100 words, please visit these other authors. Heat levels will vary from warm to erotic. 
S.J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com

Comments

Unknown said…
awesome. another shower scene :)great minds think alike. The food interrupted what was about to be a hot moment.
October 11, 2013 at 12:35 PM
J.P. Stevens said…
Dang and blast that door! Great flash xxx
October 11, 2013 at 2:38 PM
Naomi Shaw said…
I hope he gets those shorts on quick enough for the door, but retains the mood of the moment. Great flash
October 12, 2013 at 8:54 AM
Rolling Muse in The Roses said…
This was great! I loved the line "I'm coming. lol only if he could if not interrupted. Great flash!
October 13, 2013 at 3:18 AM
Anonymous said…
I hate interruptions, but after some good sex the food will be worth it. Nice post.
October 13, 2013 at 5:50 AM
Julian Spong said…
Always somebody at the door at the wrong time. Great flash
October 13, 2013 at 6:10 AM
Muffy Wilson said…
Well done, Davee! It's hard to pull shorts up over a raging erection! I can just picture it as he rushes to the door!:) xo
October 13, 2013 at 10:10 AM
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