Flasher Fiction Friday

Ahoy Fellow Fathomers, it's Friday and I'm flashing!  I return to my first recurring blog contribution, the Friday Flash Fiction. A group of writers will write exactly 100 words, no more no less, to a picture prompt. After you read my contribution, please read what the other writers have to say, the links follow. Happy Friday!
“Tomorrow? I thought you had another day?” Andrew dropped the menu into his lap.

“Well, tomorrow night, I have a nine o’clock flight, so, technically, I have a full day, rather, we have a full day.” Bea patted his exposed knee peeking from underneath a sheet.

“It’s going so fast, and we slept most of today away.” A sullen Andrew scratched his chin.

“Let’s eat, shower together, and make plans for our volcano excursion tomorrow. It’ll be fun.”

“I guess…”


“Please keep a good mood, we are having such a nice time, better than I imagined. Let’s keep it light.”

Please visit the other flashers for their interpretation of this lovely picture. Some of the other descriptions may contain explicit content. 
Michelle Howard: www.michellehowardwrites.com
S.J. Maylee: http://SJMaylee.com

Comments

Pablo Michaels said…
What was Bea's idea of having a good time? I hope they not only slept the day away but had time for some intimacy.
Muffy Wilson said…
Who is the beneficiary on Bea's life insurance policy? Not sure a volcanic excursion is really keeping it light!! This is a fascinating flash that could really be developed into a great story. Loved it, Davee:) xo
S.J. Maylee said…
Fabulous tension in this flash. Well done.
Michelle Howard said…
You really conveyed a lot of information with your 100
Naomi said…
Love the tension here. I want to know what happens next

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